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A Rose in her Hands
Contributed by
Nsa
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Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There she stands
With a rose in her hands
By a dark alley
She once saw the light
But now sees the dark
Since that fateful day
When she stopped to weep
By a grave
That sealed her fate
From now till then
Today till tomorrow
Now till forever
She always stands
On the place
Where she last stood
With a rose in her hands
There she fell
By the alley
With a rose...
...in her hands
Copyright ©
Nsa
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2003-08-23 19:25:00]
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Re: A Rose in her Hands
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 08:02:14 PM AEST
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| this was a really good poem, sorry you're in a depressed mood =( i hope you find you're way back into a happy mood.....anyways, you did a great job on this! |
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Re: A Rose in her Hands
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by Saira on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 09:06:32 PM AEST
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A very sad poem that touched my heart...I liked it a lot. Beautifully done! Hope your days be filled with joy. Stay well!
Saira |
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Re: A Rose in her Hands
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 02:40:45 AM AEST
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Awesome write, if you write like this when you are depressed imagine what you would write like when you are happy :)
keep it up I will have to check out some more of work in the future. |
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