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Intoxicating Thoughts

Contributed by KJ on Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The night sky soon to embark on droplets of rain,
A witness, is mesmerized, by beauty, it's ascertain.

Branches sway to and fro with a breathtaking melody.
Simply dancing, and gliding in despite the degree.

Your body swoons to the slight poundings of the water.
Blindly looking towards the dark, wanting to transfer,

All the negativity, the goodness to you, the lightning rod.
As the buildings around you crumble, you have to facade.

Laughs erupt from around you as you turn to observe.
Only to be echoed with screams and objects in a curve.

Thunder now accompanies the crying infants and adults.
A stranger wouldn't see sorrow, just joy with lots of faults.

A needle in a haystack, you see a smile in a group of frowns.
The owner returns your graze, you smile while it astounds.

You are feeling the rain steal away your tears in a short while.
As the wind picks up its breeze carrying debris followed by floor tiles.

As a dagger stabs each human heart, followed by gun shots.
You cannot help but to soak in those intoxicating thoughts.

Copyright © KJ ... [ 2003-08-23 08:05:00]
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Re: Intoxicating Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by crimson_purity on Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 08:39:56 PM AEST
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I really like the imagery in this poem, really good job.

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