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Skin
Contributed by
broken-glass
on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Time stood still as the waves crushed against the sand.
The wind raped my hair as I choked on the sea breeze.
Here I felt my re-birth, my rejuvination, my second youth take place.
Everything I had ever lived was washed away,
my soul was cleansed.
The grains of sand underneath my feet passionately kissed my toes,
I felt slight enlightenment as the water splashed against my ankles.
Finally I screamed, releasing all I had held in,
It was there right at the beach, where I finally shed my skin.
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broken-glass
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2003-08-23 03:05:00]
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Re: Skin
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 06:49:24 AM AEST
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Oh Broken Glass....how explosive.....now remember that moment when you set yourself free!!!
Remember it was you that you were in bondage too!, It was you, It was you, Broken Glass......now you can expand....fly high like the eagle into the sky. The boundries you've set......are all gone....never again imprision yourself again, BrokenGlass.....
Stay Free!
Wonderful inspirational Poem....please remember that moment!
lovingcritters
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Re: Skin
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 06:19:09 PM AEST
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| I killed myself once, my doctor said i didn't but he made love to a sheep once so i don't believe him. |
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Re: Skin
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by fancyface4898 on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 07:15:15 AM AEST
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| very beautiful write. it is very touching and you did a good job |
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Re: Skin
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:14:12 AM AEST
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| wow!! Love the title..the whole idea of shedding the outer layers..the skin.Still it is just that though huh>>??? Just like myself and many others ..what dirtied our souls and dreams will always be there,the key is to not let the dark surface..I have great faith that you will keep shining..Excellent!! :) |
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Re: Skin
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by knowWhat_kind on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:22:53 PM AEST
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| Great write I love to way it feels when you read it |
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