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God, Please Lay me Down to Die
Contributed by
pretty_n_pink
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Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
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God, please lay me down to die
with bright red roses by my side.
And if I wake before I die
tell what friends I have I said good-bye.
God, please don't take this as a joke
or soon myself I'll choke.
Please let me die of sudden death
and let this be my final breath.
Don't tell my mom...she left when I was five
don't have to telll my abusive father that I'm not alive.
Just let them find out on their own
and if you listen you'll hear no cry or moan.
So, don't tell my friends, my relatives, or neighbor...
just let them know..
that I was just doing them a favor.
good-bye forever!
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2003-08-22 23:35:00]
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Re: God, Please Lay me Down to Die
(User Rating: 1 )
by POOBEAR on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 11:48:00 PM AEST
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Whoa, Whoa, slow down. I am not really
one to give advise because I have tried
a few times to do myself in. But I started
writing and found that we all share the
same pain at one time or another.I care
and you have a great talent for expressing
how you feel inside. A lot of people can't
do that. Do me a favor and talk to me.
Here for you,
POOBEAR |
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Re: God, Please Lay me Down to Die
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by POOBEAR on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 11:50:35 PM AEST
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Whoa, Whoa, slow down. I am not really
one to give advise because I have tried
a few times to do myself in. But I started
writing and found that we all share the
same pain at one time or another.I care
and you have a great talent for expressing
how you feel inside. A lot of people can't
do that. Do me a favor and talk to me.
Here for you,
POOBEAR |
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Re: God, Please Lay me Down to Die
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by POOBEAR on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 11:53:35 PM AEST
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Whoa, Whoa, slow down. I am not really
one to give advise because I have tried
a few times to do myself in. But I started
writing and found that we all share the
same pain at one time or another.I care
and you have a great talent for expressing
how you feel inside. A lot of people can't
do that. Do me a favor and talk to me.
Here for you,
POOBEAR |
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Re: God, Please Lay me Down to Die
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 11:55:33 PM AEST
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this is so sad hun, I don't even know you and I'm in tears here... don't feel like you would be doing anyone a favor by dying... that's not true.
God won't take you till he's ready and as long as you're alive you've still got to hope that things will get better... cuz trust me they will. :)
I know that doesn't sound so assuring from a person who doesn't know you but believe me
and smile now.....
~Dani
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Re: God, Please Lay me Down to Die
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by Pretty_n_pink on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 01:03:06 AM AEST
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| hi...i appreciate everything you said. thanx alot |
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Re: God, Please Lay me Down to Die
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by Jennifer on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 07:22:43 PM AEST
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| I thought this poem was very good. |
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