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DAD
Contributed by
babygirlal28
on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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AS YOU STOOD BY THE ROAD TO WAVE
BYE, AS I WANTED TO CRY.
YOU SAID I HAD TO GROW !
BUT TO ME MY LIFE WAS WHOLE..
I THOUGHT I HAD YEAR'S TO LEARN
BUT IT ALL CAME TO SOON.
I LEARNED VERY QUICKLY HOW ILL YOU WERE..
IT JUST SEEMED TO SOON FOR SOME..
AS MONTHS CAME TO WEEKS AND WEEKS CAME TO DAY'S...
MY LOVE GREW STRONGER ,BUT MY
HEART GREW SADDER..
THERE WAS SO MUCH I NEEDED TO SAY
BUT YOU ALWAYS SEEMED TO KNOW
HOW I FELT..I KNOW YOU MUST HAVE
WANTED TO HEAR IT.. I ALWAYS
TRIED TO TELL YOU I LOVE YOU..
BUT MY DAY'S PASSED BY SO FAST..
I WAS JUST TOLD YOU HAD HOURS TO GO..
HOW CAN I TELL YOU AND MAKE
YOU SEE HOW I FEEL!!!!
IN SO LITTLE TIME??
BUT AS YOU GO, I WANT YOU TO
KNOW I LOVE YOU FROM THE
BOTTOM OF MY SOUL !!!!!
Copyright ©
babygirlal28
... [
2003-08-22 21:45:00]
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Re: DAD
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by hermione_am_i on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 10:50:40 PM AEST
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| that was soo sad, yet so sad. i know how you fell... well not exactly but ive lost two of my best friends now , and another one has lukemia, but shes getting better. i hope your okay. |
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Re: DAD
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by hermione_am_i on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 10:51:14 PM AEST
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| that was soo sad, yet so good. i know how you fell... well not exactly but ive lost two of my best friends now , and another one has lukemia, but shes getting better. i hope your okay. |
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Re: DAD
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by Zee on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 03:43:42 PM AEST
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| Its very sad to hear about this. My deepest sympathies r with u. a very beautiful rythm could be sensed in ur poem! Well written! |
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