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Dark Horse
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A thousand wars to fight,
your love a truth.
Many souls on a blade,
all bitter travel.
You witness a dark horse,
eyes paled from the journey.
Beg of his strength,
to do your bidding.
Callous the thought,
from behind your veils.
A whisper resounds,
and leaves you cold.
I will die for you always,
but not by your hand.......Crow
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2003-08-21 20:05:00]
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Re: Dark Horse
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 08:37:10 PM AEST
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a difficult thing to witness.....
callous the thought, from behind your veils.....profound words..... |
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Re: Dark Horse
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 09:13:16 PM AEST
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very well written
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Re: Dark Horse
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 12:28:55 AM AEST
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"I will die for you always,
but not by your hand......."
wow oh wow!! :)
I love every line. yet these last two really have me wrapped up in feelings of romance.. yet,firm words and sadness also speak.This is really very emotional.Well done!! :) **oh my...did I even make sense ?? lol..oh well .."I"know what I mean ;) |
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Re: Dark Horse
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 12:38:17 AM AEST
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"I will die for you always,
but not by your hand......."
wow oh wow!! :)
I love every line. yet these last two really have me wrapped up in feelings of romance.. yet,firm words and sadness also speak.This is really very emotional.Well done!! :) **oh my...did I even make sense ?? lol..oh well .."I"know what I mean ;) |
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Re: Dark Horse
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 12:38:20 AM AEST
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"I will die for you always,
but not by your hand......."
wow oh wow!! :)
I love every line. yet these last two really have me wrapped up in feelings of romance.. yet,firm words and sadness also speak.This is really very emotional.Well done!! :) **oh my...did I even make sense ?? lol..oh well .."I"know what I mean ;) |
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Re: Dark Horse
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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Oh, my, Crow the only word I can find to describe this poem would be profound! Like a bottomless pit....your poetry is always very mysterious to me Crow.
Few words, but so meaningful.
Great work!
lovingcritters
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Re: Dark Horse
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 12:48:40 AM AEST
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Oh, my, Crow the only word I can find to describe this poem would be profound! Like a bottomless pit....your poetry is always very mysterious to me Crow.
Few words, but so meaningful.
Great work!
lovingcritters
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Re: Dark Horse
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by shelby on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 12:45:33 PM AEST
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oh my, this is powerful and a mystery. I love this poem very good.BRAVO!!!
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Re: Dark Horse
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by Saira on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 12:00:42 AM AEST
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Good write...I liked the title too. Nicely done!
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Re: Dark Horse
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by Merry on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 09:07:50 AM AEST
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You're a very powerful writer -
this peice has such a dark cast to it - I've read it four times now - and I feel the betrayal
of this woman behind her veils -
great write
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