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Track Of Time
Contributed by
jaeann
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Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Born on a Thursday
so far from home
lion's breath of safety
new life to roam.
Cried on a Monday
no fair this pain
chained to the railing
Mama's gone insane.
Walked on a Friday
fell and sat a bit
sidewalk's full of people
sighed and had a fit.
Moved on a Saturday
the truck stocked so full
not very far to go
no weight for me to pull.
Smiled for pictures on a Tuesday
raced around the mall
lost and forgotten
no one saw the fall.
Married on a Sunday
lost in a rut
buy your freedom at forty-two dollars
and simply let the door shut.
Died on a Wednesday
buried in the rain
walked through the darkness
learned to hide the pain.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-08-21 10:45:00]
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Re: Track Of Time
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by M on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 12:21:52 PM AEST
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A very sad poem, one that i like a lot. i know how it feels to not be noticed, and having to hide pain, it´s a sad feeling.
If you wana talk, pm me.
Love and hope,
EmilyxXx |
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Re: Track Of Time
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 10:59:59 PM AEST
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strong write, very well done
Shari |
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Re: Track Of Time
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 01:59:24 AM AEST
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How very very sad, Jayme....And you are so wise. You are so intelligent....that's why! You've been there? The land of no return....and back again!
I pray everyday you will heal....your heart, and soul....you deserve so very much...not just because of what you went through, but just because you are yhou!
Love and hugs
Connie Sue |
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Re: Track Of Time
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by Crow on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 07:08:39 AM AEST
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| I read so much in your work, Crow |
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Re: Track Of Time
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:30:13 PM AEST
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| Wow, you had me at the first stanza- damn that is really unique. never thought of that. |
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Re: Track Of Time
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:30:56 PM AEST
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I get more out of this the more I read it.
Amazing |
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