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Letting Go

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Exquisite beauty as death holds her tight
Face camoflauged as ivory snows
Her last breath fading along with the night
Her fingers wrapped softly around a rose
With a handful of sleeping pills creeping down her throat
Falls gracefully into a state of comatose
She's dressed in silk and lace
A few small blood stains embrace
The cloth against her wrist
It seems to be the only thing she can count on
Always ready and willing, always ready and willing
It holds her close while she wishes she'd be missed
And she said, oh, how I love the red
She faked a smile while she bled
To let them all think she's okay
She wouldn't know how okay feels anyway
Smiles so hard it hurts
Lets her teeth slice up her tongue
Her obituary reads like a tragic movie
A story of a hopeless cause, dead so young
Last scene on the cutting room floor
Nothing is left to be cut anymore
Lets the blood bleed into the soft ivory snow
Flatlining one last time, she finally lets go

Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-08-20 06:05:00]
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Re: Letting Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 09:58:17 AM AEST
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WOW, amazing. This is so full of emotion and pain. The wording you used just made this poem as amazing as it is. I really liked this...it is awesome.

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