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I ( will be)
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i will be fire and drown you in an endless sea of flames
i will be dark clouds that bring water
i will be finite to expire with you
i will be sharp knives to cut out the heart i would serve to you
i will be plain to make you gorgeous
i will be silence to make you sound louder
i will be acceptance when you've been rejected
i will take your place and burn for you
i would do anything to be near you.
i would do anything to be with you.
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Re: I ( will be)
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 06:08:34 AM AEST
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| what beautiful scary words to say to someone....that would take such courage.....i will be plain to make you gorgeous.....sacrifice of ego....great work!!!! |
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Re: I ( will be)
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 05:04:56 PM AEST
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| intense emotion, effective repetition and some powerful imagery. i hope whoever this is for knows how you feel. an excellent write, Kate x |
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