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nothing left
Contributed by
sideshowrunaway
on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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remember how we tried so hard
remember how we got so far
But now it seems we've lost it all
I know somehow it's all my fault
...again
You're heartless, so heartless
I'm selfish, so selfish
My selfishness is thick like ice
Tried to cut it with my knife
Oops, oh no, I think i missed
I think i slipped and cut my wrist
kiss it fast before it bleeds
help me cry my eyes to sleep
watch so i don't miss a breath
why bother when there's nothing left?
I think i left my heart with you
so just keep it in your pocket
carry it in your pocket
til i see you again
Until then I'll drown myself
In my shotglass full of tears
Drinking away all my pain
Drinking away the years
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2003-08-18 21:35:00]
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Re: nothing left
(User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 02:57:33 AM AEST
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| i love the story you tell....the words you use...the phrases....so well put!!! i've been there....drinking away the pain....really great write!!!! |
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Re: nothing left
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 01:18:42 PM AEST
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| Very deep, I felt your pain. I like the part about your ex keeping your heart in their pocket. Very mature poem, well done!!! |
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