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You Are A Mountain...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 06:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Majestic in your steadiness,bound to earth with beauty
Standing tall with pride and knowing,I hear the call of thee
In sacred silence,meditation,you are heard upon the breeze
The goodness and the knowledge,all you give with ease
Youthful yet mature,beyond any words I could convey
Your soul is of the mountains,lush and full of older ways
About you are the rivers,of dreams and hopes and plans
Inside you is the spirit of a well journeyed young man
I listen to your teachings,learning from your pen
To me you are a mountain,my fellow poet friend
I lie upon you in meadows,of yellow daffodils
Or walk your wooded pathways,where bluebirds often trill
So much you have to offer,as I sit listening to your pen
To me you are a mountain,my fellow poet friend
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LovingWhispers
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2003-08-18 06:45:00]
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Re: You Are A Mountain...
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 08:15:13 AM AEST
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wonderful write, he does show wisdom well beyond his years
Shari |
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Re: You Are A Mountain...
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by norm on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 10:04:54 AM AEST
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I love your poem
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Polo's pen is mighty,
His age denies his ken,
Where e'er he got his knowledge,
leaks out his poet's pen. |
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Re: You Are A Mountain...
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by PoloRM on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 10:08:20 AM AEST
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| Your descriptions are always beautiful. =)Thanks again =o) You can camp on me anytime! |
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Re: You Are A Mountain...
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by Crow on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 08:06:06 PM AEST
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| you always do such a beautiful job, a wonderful poem, and tribute to a friend. Crow |
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Re: You Are A Mountain...
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 08:50:38 PM AEST
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This was beautiful, simply beautiful I loved all the description in this...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: You Are A Mountain...
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 09:29:57 PM AEST
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| a beautiful poem, a lovely read, paul |
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