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COWARD
Contributed by
Cancer
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Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a 90lb *****, sporting a screen name
or maybe an 80lb "Guest"
if my poetry was really that bad
don't tell me "it sux" is your best
either think of some clever way to slam it
or stop wasting my damn time
and, no, i'm not p*st that you didn't like it
i slam my own scrawls all the time
but, if you're gonna take the time to comment
then take five seconds, and leave your name too
if my write sucked so bad that you had to tell me
then, it's the least that you could do
i'm not going to hunt you down and stab you
you're entitled to your hate
and the fact that you don't like my writing
shows that you have good taste
but, next time, coward, leave your name
or don't bother commenting at all
i'll ignore every stone you throw
from the other side of anonymity's wall
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-08-17 23:35:00]
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Re: COWARD
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by Crow on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 12:12:32 AM AEST
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| I agree, thats a cheap shot. you should have a chance to defend yourself.. |
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Re: COWARD
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 01:52:24 AM AEST
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Well I like your poetry for one. I must agree with you if you cant say what you need to upfront shut your face. I had someone do this to some of mine recently also but had no name with it.Chicken S if ya ask me.
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Re: COWARD
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by jaeann on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 02:52:29 AM AEST
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i agree with you....
i like the last two lines....."in your face" perfectly!!! |
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