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Contributed by
Chanti
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Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hate how much it hurts inside,
seeing you, i almost cried,
having you, i felt deprived,
but without you, i feel alive,
it seems like youve taken all my friends,
it cuts me deep, i wont pretend,
i guess those friendships were never real,
theres so much more, too much i feel,
but im letting go, i just dont care,
i never really needed you there,
i dont need fickle friends by my side,
you have a piece of my heart, but not my pride,
ill hold my chin up, while you look down,
your face goes red, when im around,
your nothing to me now, just like our past,
we had our moment, lost it just as fast,
i wont lie to you, sometimes not being with you i regret,
i hate you, i love you, but soon ill forget.
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Chanti
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2003-08-17 13:05:00]
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Re: No Title
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 06:11:00 PM AEST
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| this is good...i like what you had to say.....i'd like to see a title though.....your words to him deserve one!!!! |
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 04:01:47 PM AEST
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This ought to be called "Resolve"
It happened to me several times (see "He's not the only one"). It's one of the perils of life between 15 and 25. this shows great maturity and stoicism beyond your years.
I think eventually you'll make a right choice
Skillfull write, good meter, good rhyme proper poetry, the emotion "bursts" out of the page.
I must read more of yours. I'm slowly exploring, it's a huge site.
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 08:04:42 PM AEST
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Simply put... I loved this! I loved the force and the emotion in this poem. I hope to see more by you in the future. Bravo!
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