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Loser
Contributed by
shortgurl2006
on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I look at myself in the mirror
what is it I see?
I see a failure, a loser
There's nothing I can be
I hate my looks, my life, it all
no matter what it is I saw
I need help, what can I say,
I want to kill myself everyday
Everyday i try to live
But there's nothing to live for
I just want to slit my wrists
And fall to the floor
But there's always someone
Behind the door
They say they care
but I dont' believe them
No one would care
what can I say
I find I have less friends
everyday
I don't think my life will
get any better
All I do is get p**** off
I can't get thru
WHAT CAN I DO?
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2003-08-16 21:05:00]
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Re: Loser
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nate on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 07:47:49 AM AEST
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i get mad cause no one reads my poety,
you get mad and write poetry,
funny in a sense,
but hey life is too short to worry bout everyone elses opinion read some of my poetry,
they are pretty much all saying the same thing,
and that is i dont discriminate i hate everyone,
life is too short to worry bout other people,
love yourself pat yourself on the back,
and never let anyone push you down,
no one in this world is worth it,
you dont have to please anybody hey i liked your poem i thought it explains alot,
but its not worth it,
i dont know i talk to damn much sorry. .. .
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Re: Loser
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by Broken-glass on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 03:27:21 PM AEST
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| I like the part about saying people say they care when they don't. I've been there and I'm with you. Keep writing, but ty writing something good about yourself. It may be hard with the way we are treated by the media and the way society expects us to be but at the end of the day you can still look at yourself and say: I'm beautiful. |
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Re: Loser
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by Broken-glass on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 03:27:32 PM AEST
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| I like the part about saying people say they care when they don't. I've been there and I'm with you. Keep writing, but try writing something good about yourself. It may be hard with the way we are treated by the media and the way society expects us to be but at the end of the day you can still look at yourself and say: I'm beautiful. |
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Re: Loser
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 08:58:28 PM AEST
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| u dont talk to much and ur poetry is great u have a way of expressing ur feelings i love u so much bye talk to u later |
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Re: Loser
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 08:58:38 PM AEST
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| u dont talk to much and ur poetry is great u have a way of expressing ur feelings i love u so much bye talk to u later |
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Re: Loser
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:24:14 AM AEST
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| where can i start. i could say that someone does care about you. i think you need to go out there and find someone for you cause i think you need someone to love you for you. i also think you need to love yourself before you do anything cause you can't love no one than yourself and yourself believes in you more than anyone |
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