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Villains
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
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Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Do I murder you when I walk out the door?
Do I leave gaping wounds within you when I step into your path?
Do I drown you underwater or cause you to asphyxiate
In this air of unbidden anguish I exert over you?
Do I condemn you for my crimes while I languish in my pride
Or make you sink into the netherworld while I perform my paean?
I知 sorry; I was the criminal.
Did I shape you as the antithesis of who you really are?
Did I seem detrimental in my words to you?
Did I paint your vision morose and lugubrious or make the
Beasts wander and plant mutations in your blameless mind?
Did I play mordantly with you and sting your soul
With the countless misdeeds I致e committed against you?
I知 sorry; I値l fasten my own handcuffs.
Was I balancing on icicles when I meant to be kind to you?
Was I twisting your mind about like it was a paltry object?
Was I presenting you as the fool while I hid behind this
Man-made wall of negativity and cowardice?
Was I blinding you with an untruth, passing myself off as
A higher being when I was merely a king痴 pawn?
I知 sorry; this is my retribution.
These eyes have seen enough of life to know that
Making amends will prove an arduous task.
Forgiveness is fragile, I do concede, but I have made up my mind
I値l grant you peace and I値l leave you be
I never want to impair you again, so I値l just
Leave.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Avarice_Riot
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2003-08-16 15:05:00]
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Re: Villains
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 03:07:00 AM AEST
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| Hey, you projected your emotions very well. Nice poem. |
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Re: Villains
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 08:20:09 AM AEST
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Language pushed to it's full scope
Introspection revealed
A fascinating read |
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Re: Villains
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by krismisevski on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:46:57 AM AEST
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That first line is GREAT! The whole poem reads very well. I stumbled upon this one and I'm glad I did. Fantastic sense of sarcasm. I really enjoyed this poem. I look forward to reading more of your work. Beautiful.
-Kris |
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