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Indian Heart
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
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Born to the spirit the Ancients might send from the trail of tears, so telling the journey
the enemy cries.
This one gathers all nations in heart and spirit, prays the wisdom of long ago dreams.
Mother Earth cries for her children that
have died for her rape.
Misted mountains of the north the darkest
emerald green, all nations shed tears
to moisten her lips.
Indian Heart the nature you hold,
born of the song, a long ago wind.
Indian Heart what form you might take,
a beautiful child, to dry her eyes...... Crow
[so cruel the journey; the settlers that lined the trail of tears, weeped for their enemy.]
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2003-08-16 13:45:00]
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Re: Indian Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:16:31 PM AEST
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let me be the first to correct this, "weeped?
I can`t find that word anywhere!. I promise not to use it again. Crow |
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Re: Indian Heart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 05:29:18 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful Crow...... Shar will love it! Well done my friend...Larry Oh... and weeped is good enough for me..lol |
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Re: Indian Heart
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 06:02:10 PM AEST
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wonderful write, very moving
Shari |
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Re: Indian Heart
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 08:05:48 PM AEST
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a long ago wind......whispers and kisses some with the widsdom of the ages......
beautiful |
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Re: Indian Heart
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 12:21:25 AM AEST
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| No words can be found my friend...sometimes its beyond us to express a feeling...so I will speak gently....and proudly say.. ~wa do~ |
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Re: Indian Heart
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 01:38:12 AM AEST
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Dear Crow,
What a marvelous way of expressing the horrible horrific suffering of these dear people. I loved it all the way through, Crow. Was so true.....and the word weeped....is used many times by poets, crow....you can even make up your own words if you like. So never apologize for using a word you can't find in the dictionary.....they weren't poets but we are! *smiles*
lovingcritters
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Re: Indian Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 11:49:05 PM AEST
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| well done and beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Indian Heart
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 04:29:10 PM AEST
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this is unique and beautiful - I have very strong tribal ties- I am part Indian - my great great grandmother used to tell us stories when we were very little - she died when I was 6 - so my memory of those stories is very faded by time and the history is lost. But your beautiful poem brought back a flood of rich feelings.
merry |
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