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Innocent eyes
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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His eyes reflect the ocean blue
His face shines with gleam
He's so innocent and true
He's like an endless dream
He's so pure inside
He's like a shining white dove
From all the secrets I hide
I've fallen so in love
I hold him forever in my heart
Forever our love be true
I will always remember him
right from the start
Innocent eyes
Reflecting the ocean blue
Forever I love you.
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youngpoet1989
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2003-08-16 09:05:00]
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Re: Innocent eyes
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:17:05 AM AEST
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| Good flow. |
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Re: Innocent eyes
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by Damaged on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:48:21 PM AEST
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| This was absolutely breath-taking! It was beautifully written! I'd love to read more poems by you! Keep up the awesome writing! |
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Re: Innocent eyes
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by Crow on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 06:50:04 PM AEST
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| this is very good work! easy to read, and beautiful. Crow |
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Re: Innocent eyes
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 06:46:11 AM AEST
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This was really good so beautifully crafted. He's a lucky guy whoever he is.
Bobo (Joel) |
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