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Can't Have Him
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
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I can't have him
I know this is true
But some times I want him
I don't know what to do
He's very kind and sweet
But he's taken by a friend
With her I can not compete
I hope they are happy in the end
I hope she always treats him right
Friends is all that we should be
But some times I think of him in the night
I know that he could never want me
I am fat and ugly
To him I am only a friend
Some times I think he can see
I want him to be more than a friend
He's a friend that's how it must be
I wish the best to them
Happy is what I wish them to be
I know I can't have him
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Re: Can't Have Him
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:11:27 AM AEST
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You're not fat and ugly.
I don't want you thinking
Like that.
MayBe this can work out
BeTween you guys. |
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Re: Can't Have Him
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by Crow on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:10:17 PM AEST
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I was sad reading this, then I looked again!
do you see who beautiful you are? Crow |
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Re: Can't Have Him
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 04:52:41 PM AEST
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| This is so well written..I could almost feel the pain that your in....I do wish you all the best...take care....I have wrteen a poem called "Your Already Taken"...kind of like this one.... |
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Re: Can't Have Him
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 02:57:43 AM AEST
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A really well written piece about the most difficult period in younger peoples lives. (see my poem "He's not the only one")
A century ago communities were smaller people didn' travel very much, choices were few, compromises were many and indeed the only practical solution.
Now we travel,mix, and have wider ambitions. Life is much more difficult and stressful
Your poem reveals an old head on young shoulders. You are bound to chose wisely and make a success of it. (other of my poems that might interest you are "Love boat" and "Love is".) |
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Re: Can't Have Him
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 06:22:32 PM AEST
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friends first for loves foundation,
maybe a day will come there wont be hesitation,
never underestimate love,
it alights upon you like a dove,
when it is meant to be, youll see
love will come to you; like it did me:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Can't Have Him
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 06:07:31 AM AEST
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| I agree with a previously comment; I'm not sure if you understand how beautiful you really are. You express such compassion and thoughtfulness in this poem, it by far overshadows the theme of lust. I know too much about that emotion, it is a hard one to deal with, but it is only an emotion afterall, and happiness is much more important then desire. If desire is going to make you or the people it affects miserable, then it is not worth the time. Your words of wisdom are wonderful, and I have no idea, nor interest on your age, for wisdom is eternal. |
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Re: Can't Have Him
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by Merry on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 05:06:49 PM AEST
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when love is real - looks don't matter
and don't be so hard on yourself - I can see that you are beautiful in your words
I am ancient and wise in these matters
merry |
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