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Truly the Way I Feel!
Contributed by
Mack22
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Monday, 12th August 2002 @ 08:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Truly the Way I Feel!
In the darkness, there is the light
Like the darkness in your eyes
Your soul is the fire deep inside
I would not dare lick my finger nor my thumb and touch the fiery wick of your candle deep within
For I would only burn myself
Which is fine, for your affection for me cannot be blown out nor destroyed by my bitter jealousy!
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Mack22
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2002-08-12 20:09:56]
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Re: Truly the Way I Feel!
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by Chrissie on
Tuesday, 13th August 2002 @ 12:51:53 AM AEST
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I like this very much Mack ...you write maturely and seem very in touch with your own feelings. Well done and welcome to YPDC. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
Chrissie |
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Re: Truly the Way I Feel!
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by anothermack22 on
Thursday, 15th August 2002 @ 05:45:13 AM AEST
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| wow thats was incredible.keep that up and there's no tellin what will happen. |
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