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AGONY INSIDE ME
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dusting through the years
This pain I endure inside
Forever yonders
Beneathe the blurry sea
Speads across the distance
Dividing the individuals amongst us
Seeking our reflection
Hiding what we truly feel inside
Engaged with saddness and
Our moral ways
Covered in this deep blue water
With crescent blood
It lursts though
Bleeding black as the black
Night sky appears upon us
Forever alone and dead
Roaming around this tainted blood
Crawling with miseries and mysteries
Attracted with darkness and across the Cracked wall....
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2003-08-15 18:25:00]
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Re: AGONY INSIDE ME
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 07:37:09 PM AEST
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I loved this very poetic and well written
Engaged with saddness and
Our moral ways
I loved those two lines not to sure why, but I hope u feel better soon.
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Re: AGONY INSIDE ME
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:19:33 PM AEST
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| Good write, keep it up. |
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Re: AGONY INSIDE ME
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 07:31:49 AM AEST
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Kittiekat, I don't know if this will help but one of my grandaughters (aged 16) has had a lot of difficulties and disappointments (through health problems).
The other day just when I thought she was heading for a real depression (head in hands) she got up and said..........'Oh well that was yesterday' ........
smiled and walked out.
bob
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