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old scab
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
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you are the scar that just won't heal
just keep tearing apart
you are the only pain i feel
the ash-grey stitch upon my heart
you are the reason
that i hate myself
you are the reason
i can't trust anyone else
i let you in
you let me down
you laughed at me
just a stupid clown
dignity, manhood, money
you took them all when you left
and though you're gone, it's obvious
you're not done torturing me yet
parade your new men for me
shiny muscles and fast cars
soon, each one will be like me
jaded eyes and bleeding scars
it's getting harder to care
harder to pray for your Death
i've gone completely numb around
the heart-shaped scar you left
you are a scab and i
am picking you away
you are a scar and i
will let you heal and fade
you are a memory that i
refuse to recall
just another empty whore
really, Nothing at all
you'll get no more tears from me
i'm happy now, why can't you see
she's twice the woman you'll never be
thank you for setting me free
i hope that you find happiness too
and i hope that STD isn't too hard on you
and if you ever need someone to talk to
call someone else, i'm through with you
you are a scab and i
am picking you away
you are a scar and i
will let you heal and fade
you are a memory that i
refuse to recall
just another empty whore
really, Nothing at all
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Cancer
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2003-08-15 11:05:00]
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Re: old scab
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by aom on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 06:55:55 PM AEST
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| the chorus is great - I like how you cut the metaphors with "just another empty whore" - brings it back to raw emotion. and, "jaded eyes" is beautiful...thanks for sharing- |
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Re: old scab
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 09:45:54 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent write ... nasty but good ... Jan |
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Re: old scab
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:32:54 AM AEST
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| I love it. |
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Re: old scab
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:19:41 PM AEST
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she has been told......wow.....just dessert!!!
jaded eyes...smart line.....once again.....awesome!!!! you caught the hatred singed with bittersweet lost love.....awesome...... |
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