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The Sweetest Part
Contributed by
POOBEAR
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Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Innocence dies so young,
when guns are brought for show and tell.
Will we recognize heaven,
if we cannot see that war is hell?
We are born innocent,
but hatred of another's skin color
must be taught and driven like
a stake into the heart.
I don't understand this,
I peel an orange because
I was shown that what lies beneath
the skin is the sweetest part.
Copyright ©
POOBEAR
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2003-08-15 09:45:00]
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Re: The Sweetest Part
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 12:20:46 PM AEST
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Very interesting and true. We are what we are taught. But you don't mention religion which has been the cause of more wars than anything else
A fascinating write. I'd value your opinion on my recent poem "I'm giving up on Gods"
I'm going down your list over the next week would you like to give me some you are particularly pleased with to start me off.
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Re: The Sweetest Part
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 01:13:11 PM AEST
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Very interesting and true. We are what we are taught. But you don't mention religion which has been the cause of more wars than anything else
A fascinating write. I'd value your opinion on my recent poem "I'm giving up on Gods"
I'm going down your list over the next week would you like to give me some you are particularly pleased with to start me off.
bob |
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Re: The Sweetest Part
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:08:12 PM AEST
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| this was a beautiful write....... |
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Re: The Sweetest Part
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 10:53:21 PM AEST
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| good message here:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Sweetest Part
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:49:50 PM AEST
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| We need to realize this. |
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