Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 10-November 03:07:03 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Goodbye Misty Mountain...

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry




~:**:~
One last walk within your spell,a final time with you
Today I've come to say goodbye,this I'd never thought I'd do
Sing to me my misty mountain,rock me with your lullaby
Please let me grace your presence, with one last final sigh
Come forth my tiny critter friends,listen to my heart
Know that I am broken,for us ever having to part
Yet let us not be sorrowed,nor without our song
For here where there's such beauty,sad tears do not belong
Always I will remember, the sweet music of the birds
Never will I forget,the inspiration for my souls words
~:**:~
Softly now,so quietly,we'll stroll down the path beyond
All the ferns and flowers,to our secret cleansing pond
Come with me and bathe,let us one last time rejoice
In the whispers of this mountain,her gentle soothing voice
On the breeze I smell sweet jasmine,and I'm honeysuckled kissed
So elegant, the trees stand tall,reaching through the mist
To draw in a little sunlight,and warm their outstretched leaves
I too am outstretched,grateful,for the warmth that I receive
I'll miss the summer evenings,when on dusk the crickets call
Where on top of Misty Mountain,I would let my dreams freefall
~:**:~
How I'll crave every day,for your early mornings mist
Dewdrops on the tree ferns,winters pretty kiss
Brush turkeys in the bushes,foraging with their young
Curious of the windchimes,that through your woods I've hung
Kookaburras at sunrise, will no longer say hello
For when all the birds come calling,no longer will I show
Parakeets and magpies,galahs and finches,even wrens
No more to rise each morning to all my feathered friends
I'm trying hard to hold the tears,not let them spill upon your soul
Yet I fear without my sanctuary,my days will not be whole
~:**:~
So I sink into the liquid depths,immerse myself within your waters
And lie cradled in your tender love,as though one of your daughters
As I rise to your rippled surface,and open up my eyes
I look around and shed a tear,on the edge of a velvet sigh
Naked as I always am,when I dance here to your song
Gives my breath new meaning,where else could I belong
Never will I wander away,never could I be
Anywhere that you're not felt,deep inside of me
I just have to close my eyes and there so clear you are
Goodbye Misty Mountain,I'll always hold you from afar
~:**:~




Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-08-14 17:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Goodbye Misty Mountain... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 05:24:53 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Ahhhhhhhh........simply refreshing!!! I think I need to pinch myself! This took me on a
lovely voyage! Thanks!
Angel always...godspeed...joni


Re: Goodbye Misty Mountain... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 06:27:11 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Oh My dear lovingwhispers, how much I can relate....for I too left my beautous mountain estate.....the year was 1975....I cried all the way over the Rabbit ears pass....I'll never find another like you my dear mountain lass.
Arriving in Midwest with no moutains, not even hills no less! But I found beauty even in the corn fields...you really can hear it grow.....and loving whispers....I know you will find beauty in anywhere you go....because the beauty is in your heart, my wonderful friend....and whereever you hang your bonnet....there it will always be.....you'll be able to roam and find beauty even without a mountain or a tree!
My heart cries tears for you....but trust yourself, my dear....it will be an ajustment....remember you'll be surrounded by another wonderful love...with real arms to embrace you.....and hold you....much better than any mountain or critter too!
lovingcritters
Connie


Re: Goodbye Misty Mountain... (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 08:15:08 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
it just held me spellbound, what a wonderful picture you have created. Crow


Re: Goodbye Misty Mountain... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:50:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Im breathless this is so beautiful and vivid I can see the small animals and smell the aromas and feel the mountain air all around me??Where is this your speaking of?? I also miss my mountains and the smell of the pine and the roar of the river running though it my my this is spell binding.
Michelle


Re: Goodbye Misty Mountain... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 05:00:28 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Ah, this is so beautiful ... I can only hope that your journey takes you to a more beautiful place than your misty mountain ... with hope and love Jan


Re: Goodbye Misty Mountain... (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 05:13:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
oh thank you so much....hold this place in your heart forever......i wish you peace and safe journey......much joy for your new endeavors........




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com