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Hallowed Ground
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Through the depths
no hallowed ground
screams persist
pieces of life that you re-live.
Evil some
not the beast
you reside, no control.
Fermented faces
not quite seen
blood runs black
transparent chains.
Unknown depth
universal weight
putrid scales line this world.
You hold your breath
forever.....and ever.... and ever.
The Angel has taken human form
and rocks me gently.
Dad its just a dream... Crow
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2003-08-14 12:45:00]
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:03:31 PM AEST
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intense,, very good write
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:38:46 PM AEST
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| This Poem is great! |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 04:59:07 PM AEST
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Breathless, Crow.....I too held my breathe! once again what a gift have you...few words..much to view...in my mind's eye....when I read your poetry.....my thoughts wander.....stray to another time....without rhyme...Uptight write. Tremendously Traumatic.
Imagery clear....I could even hear!
lovingcritters
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Saira on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:53:46 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Good work!
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:03:08 PM AEST
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| I don`t have many of these writes. thank goodness! thank you, Crow |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:05:23 PM AEST
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| thank you so much, Crow |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:10:39 PM AEST
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| thank you so much! i to caught myself holding my breath. Crow |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:12:59 PM AEST
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| thank you Saira, i don`t write much of this. Crow |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 12:28:14 AM AEST
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intense feeling that comes right to me Crow well done.
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 06:11:25 AM AEST
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| Silence echoes here ...around me......in the darkness...only candlelight talks.I have sat for many moments just thinking...not what to say or how to comment but more thinking of how deeply you etch your words into my mind.From this side of the rainbow..to yours.....(((huggers))) |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Crow on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:14:43 PM AEST
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| I welcome the night, its just as alive as the day. thank goodness I don`t have much of this work. thank you shar |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:31:08 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, well written and it was a well worth read.
Keep up the excellent writting. |
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Re: Hallowed Ground
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by Crow on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 01:39:35 AM AEST
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| thank you so much, i don`t do a lot of dark writing, Crow |
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