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confusion
Contributed by
Cancer
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Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
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this is not where i'm supposed to be
can't remember who i'm supposed to be
i close my eyes, and i can feel it all fade
freezing in the shadow of the razor blade
helping hands and middle fingers
bowed heads and broken knees
happiness, shallow and temporary
the agony of their hell, promised for eternity
confusion, i can't escape it
the extremes bleed together
the only true color left in this world
is the red when the vein is severed
this is not where i'm supposed to be
can't remember who i was told to be
i close my eyes, and i can feel it all fade
freezing in the shadow of the razor blade
shoulders to cry on, knees in the face
loved forever, or until replaced
welcomed in victory, loved by all i meet
suddenly alone, outcast in defeat
eccentric, insane
shaky boundaries at best
acceptance relies
on the size of a breast
feared or adored
the masses decide
if my voice will be heard
or i'll be crucified
confusion, i can't escape it
the extremes bleed together
the only true color left in this world
is the red when the vein is severed
this is not where i want to be
don't care who i was told to be
i close my eyes, and pray that it will fade
warming up to the touch, of my cold razor blade
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Cancer
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2003-08-14 09:25:00]
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Re: confusion
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by hardcoreputa on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:15:52 AM AEST
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you didn't need to spoon feed me the message of this... i too have been there as you might know. my fav. line was
"loved forever, or until replaced"...
not sure why.... well this is another great work from you... while reading it i cant help but look at my scars and think keep it up ~Apryl
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Re: confusion
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:39:49 AM AEST
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I didn't even read your decrpid poetry, in future you should be more coutrtious to those who YOU wish to read it, if not, keep it in your drawer where it belongs.
Ed |
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Re: confusion
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by Cancer on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 07:43:52 PM AEST
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well ed, i won't point out the fact that you spelled "courteous" incorrectly, because that wouldn't be very "courteous", now would it? i will, however, point out that you wasted my time, despite the fact that i specifically asked you not to do so. thanks for reminding me why i hate people.
but, i forgive you, ed. after all, you're only human. obviously a human with a third grade education, but a human none the less. thanks for your pointless comment, and please feel free to never leave another one of your grammatical abortions on my doorstep again.
friends forever
Cancer
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P.S. you also misspelled “decrepit”. next time, spell check or buy a dictionary before you start mouthing my manners. i could barely read the drunken stammer that you posted. lay off the sauce, ed.
hugs and kisses |
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Re: confusion
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by jaeann on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 04:58:09 AM AEST
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| eccentric, insane............very shaky boundaries........i agree.......but this whole piece........wow!!! "spoon feeding" can be difficult ...more difficult that the write itself......the acceptance line.......well, that one hit home......thank you.....beautiful job as always..... |
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Re: confusion
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:36:10 PM AEST
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(laugh)
Well... your "author's note" is something that should be put at the beginning of every poem. I particularly hate writing something there, though I usually do it anyway.
It seems so forced and hollow. ***** ***** *****.
The poem itself is touching. I'm emotionly sick right now, and your work helps as a salve. Even though I don't "carve" (or whatever the ***** its called), the skin of this is true inside and out. I would post a favorite part, but it would be injustice to the rest.
I can't enter this without giving you props for your reply to Ed. It disgust me and your comment was great. haha! |
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