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~*o si yo*~
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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~Great Spirit~...
upon the earth let fall the rains to cleanse my soul
hear me ~Great Spirit~...
in the movement of my flesh
*dancing in praise to your song*
guide my senses,be my path
following,I will step gently among your creations
know my spirit is of wonder and
your light fills me
~Great Spirit~...
you touch me through the wildflowers and
moonlit breezes
you are the tender call of daybreak
awakening me from journeys I take
beside you in the comfort of your wisdom
~Great Spirit~...
my dreams are many,my will is strong
pride is abundant,for I am your daughter
~Great Spirit~
this I will always sing...
I will share my heart openly,welcoming all
I will nurture my soul with this earth you gave
I will dance and give thanks for my blessings
I will walk carefully across this land,with whispering moccasins
and replenish its beauty,with my offerings of touch
I will pause in thought
never speaking my tongue without care
~Great Spirit~...
hear me when I say ~*o si yo*~
~father of this earth~...
hear my hello...
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Re: ~*o si yo*~
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by shelby on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:48:29 AM AEST
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Oh my this lifted me tonight and raced goosebumps up and down my spine.This is so inspirational and lovely.Thanks for this I mean it.More more more!!!!!!!
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Re: ~*o si yo*~
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by vincy on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 02:21:19 AM AEST
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I hear you like a poet hears a poetess
like the great spirit would hear a goddess.
I was also able to trace the visual effects of this poem
to the variations in the formation of the morning dew. |
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Re: ~*o si yo*~
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by vincy on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 02:38:40 AM AEST
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I hear you like a poet hears a poetess
like the great spirit would hear a goddess.
I was also able to trace the visual effects of this poem
to the variations in the formation of the morning dew. |
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Re: ~*o si yo*~
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 04:20:38 AM AEST
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Dear LovingWhispers,
I think the Great Spirit has been very busy here lately. I just finished a poem this afternoon and it too was a prayer to the Great One. I just love Indian prayers.....they are so open and so loving, so lifting and so kind!
That's what I thought when I read this poem. That must be how you are too, Lovingwhispers, for the Great Spirit says what you have in your heart....will come out of your mouth...my sister o si yo.
Beautifully written. Really enjoyed
lovingcritters.
Watch for mine:
"We Will be known by the tracks we leave behind...Dakota Proverb |
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Re: ~*o si yo*~
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 08:27:59 AM AEST
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this was absoulutely enlightening, inspirational, it lifts you up in praise, great work, it made my heart sing
Shari |
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Re: ~*o si yo*~
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by jaeann on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 04:24:52 AM AEST
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| i praise you .....your words uplifted me....something i would gladly recite during meditation......wonderful..... |
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Re: ~*o si yo*~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 09:03:59 PM AEST
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oh sharon, you know i love this sooo much! sooo beautiful! this is the only one that means anything to me, spirit wise, for i too am spiritual, and this has warmed my heart, thanks for sharing, simply lovely, hugs n' love and flowers, nessa
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