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Fireflies Dance
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when i see the fireflies dance
lighting up gracefully
in oh so perfect moments
you will always come to mind
and the first night
i caught a glimpse of their light
the way we talked for much too long
and how i hungered for your kiss
knowing you were much too special
just to let you slip away
i tried to tell you how i felt
it fell from my lips in jumbles
nervous i instantaneously became
so i began to withdraw my claim
but it was too late
already you knew
what i wanted.. was you
Copyright ©
xxmonstahxx
... [
2003-08-13 20:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fireflies Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by NikkiMNelson on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 08:57:24 PM AEST (User
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That was so beautiful!!! Write More Plz!!!!
!!*!!nIkkI!!*!! |
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Re: Fireflies Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:10:48 AM AEST (User
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its nice to see another firefly lover here!This poem is delightful and vivid, nice job.
michelle |
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