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my promise (to you)
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
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you promised you would always be here
even if it was only in your digital way
it seems this ride is out of control and
i ve lost control of the wheel
i was told to learn to love myself
but its hard to when every day is h*ll
and it pains me to be missing you so much now that you've broken your word
my promise to you is that i ll stop caring now
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Re: my promise (to you)
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by Saira on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 03:58:27 PM AEST
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This is quite a great piece of write. Good work!
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Re: my promise (to you)
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 05:04:16 PM AEST
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| i love the simplicity and emotion in this. you write so well in so few words. remember, i'm always here. Kate x |
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