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Frozen Cotton
Contributed by
PixiePuff
on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Frozen tufts of crystal cotton
Icy drops of rain
Chilling, dripping, glistening, crisping,
See the slick remains
Tears... They freeze like diamond tracks
Cold air hurts my eyes
Dripping, chilling, crisping, glistening,
Silver linings hide
Covered, cold and numbed with cotton
Brisk wind makes tufts fly
Glistening, chilling, dripping cotton
I'm too cold to cry...
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2003-08-13 18:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Frozen Cotton
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 04:27:55 PM AEST (User
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Mmm good write ... intriguing .... Jan |
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Re: Frozen Cotton
(User Rating: 1 ) by RealCrystal on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 06:57:33 PM AEST (User
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This is a great poem...all of it was brought together in the last line...great write!!! |
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