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Last call
Contributed by
vincy
on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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All I have left is just a thread
separating me from here and there
I am holding on to the very end
of this space between life and death
before I let go let me make a go
"One more kiss if you please!".
I might as well loonie this loop
and reach out at standing words
before they get rounded.
I am all lips at this final calling
a bottle rolling empty on the floor
serves the last drop of sustenance
reserved for such occasions.
I am here to disturb this rioting silence
my intervention is as neutral as I come
my insertion out of the very need
to command such demanding attention.
A point of view is a serious liability
in approaching the hereafter.
I am going to keep my lips sealed
thereafter.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-08-13 15:05:00]
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Re: Last call
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 04:42:36 PM AEST
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oh my god!!! i would comment but i'm rereading it as i type.....this is amazing.....and reaching out at standing words......freakin' wow!!! how did you get inside my head???
you have one hell of a piece of work here!!! |
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Re: Last call
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by Jacquelynne on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 06:55:28 PM AEST
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| hey vincy, I liked this one a lot. |
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