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He Hated Her
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He hated her,
And was commonly known,
She hated him as well.
Old enemies,
The crowds portrayed,
About our personel.
They faught and squabbled
Many a time,
And though both of such were smart,
Their quarrels reduced,
To wordy shoots,
That claimed both of their hearts.
When she went away,
Though he yelled, "Yay,"
Others could tell his true feelings.
Even if he not yet
Had begun to regret,
Running from sorid revealings.
But when she came back,
Instead of mean jests,
He noticed the sad in her eyes.
For whatever the reason, Ever the why,
His dainty young foe
Had started to cry.
His heart bled with pain,
Strong with remorse,
For whatever had caused her to break.
He rushed to her side,
Her comfort abide,
Leaving an awe in his wake.
To wipe away tears,
To stiffle her cries,
To hold her close in his arms.
Two nemesis
In such an embrace,
Was reason and cause for alarm.
And though they got looks,
So many a stare,
Neither or them did part.
For if such occured,
It would more than disgrace,
The findings of love in their hearts.
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InnerBeautyQueen
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2003-08-13 11:35:00]
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Re: He Hated Her
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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| i love this, what a great story/poem. the ending is very refreshing that they found eachother. Crow |
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Re: He Hated Her
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 04:14:26 AM AEST
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| thanks! I'm sooooooo glad people are actually reading and liking my poetry. I've never really shown my peotry to others before/ |
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Re: He Hated Her
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by Cruxlight on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 03:52:42 AM AEST
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Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.-T. S. Eliot
yours does. good job |
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Re: He Hated Her
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:45:41 AM AEST
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Kept me reading till the end.So glad they found each oher.Good write.
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