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Down to you
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Down to earth with one last breathe
I call ur name
For u are my muse
U do all my thinking
U put all my rules
Do you think my life is over?
Or I m pretty good?
U drew all my silence
With Ur monotone
U muted all my melodies
With Ur cunning tongue
Done in hell with Ur steady love
Killed me with Ur sweetness
Buried me with Ur sourness
But I m happy now!
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2003-08-13 10:35:00]
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Re: Down to you
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 01:44:47 PM AEST
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| interesting write.....i liked it.....i like the cunning tongue line..... |
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Re: Down to you
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by Zee on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 04:39:25 PM AEST
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| Very Intelligently written. Small lines but strong words r the highlights of u r writing abilities. Very Good!! |
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Re: Down to you
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 10:25:04 PM AEST
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Great write, I really enjoyed it!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Down to you
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by Saira on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 08:58:16 PM AEST
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This is a very good write with powerful words. I liked these lines...
"Done in hell with Ur steady love
Killed me with Ur sweetness
Buried me with Ur sourness"
Thanks for sharing friend!
Saira
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