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Darkness
Contributed by
hazelnut
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Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
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The comforting darkness flows
like warm liquid
Shields from piercing glows
Darkness envelops like fluid
Hidden behind a veil of tears
Silence was my companion
During nights like these throughout the years
I lose myself in black oblivion
Darkness was my sanctuary, sublime
When I didn't have to face the world that taunted
When dark fantasies danced in my mind
Where no cruel laughter haunted
But why do the tears continue to fall?
Is there hope for a better tomorrow at all?
Dawn breaks...
A ray of weak sunlight from the east
I dried my eyes
A flicker of hope (waiting to be extinguished?)
Copyright ©
hazelnut
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2003-08-13 09:05:00]
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Re: Darkness
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by krystal on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 09:35:44 AM AEST
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Oh hazelnut, what can I say? This poem is absolutely fabulous...you have reached me right to the very centre of my soul. Deeply moving and touching...you have agreat talent my friend please continue sharing your gift....
Krystal:) |
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Re: Darkness
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by PoloRM on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:24:03 AM AEST
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Good job, great write.
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There's always a new Dawn
Towards which we're all drawn
And when you know this is your last fall
Fake hopes better than no hopes at all. |
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Re: Darkness
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by Qohinoor on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:22:20 AM AEST
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| Excellent write. Any more coming soon? |
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