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MY SUNSHINE
Contributed by
Del
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Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There's nothing better than sunshine,
On a bright and sunny day.
Reminds me of my love for you,
In a warm and cuddly way.
You brought sunshine into my life,
The very first day we met.
I knew the moment I saw you,
You were the someone I couldn't forget.
It can be rainy, dark clouds above.
The day can be filled with gloom.
But I only see the sunshine,
When you walk into the room.
I wish I could have my sunshine
With me morning, noon and night.
He'd shine on me when I'm despondent,
He'd make everything so right.
The sun will keep on shining,
Thru all the coming years.
I want my sunshine with me,
To shine away my tears.
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Del
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2003-08-13 03:35:00]
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Re: MY SUNSHINE
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by garyh on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:42:14 AM AEST
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| nice write.. you kept the rhythm good |
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Re: MY SUNSHINE
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 03:58:22 AM AEST
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Del I really enjoyed your poem.....I especially like the line
I only see the sunshine when you walk into the room.
Very Good indeed! Lovely write, enjoyable to read!
lovingcritters
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