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Black Heart
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
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Black Heart I can see years back,
the woman that left you on a darkening
corner, a child of eight.
You smile after thousands of years it seems,
not wanting to blame or heal inside.
How tortured you are, the lies, the revenge,
the people you hurt.
Sooth yourself Black Heart don`t care,
you have done that for years.
Death awaits, and you will follow,
no second chance for the darkened souls.
Silence my answer again...... Crow
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2003-08-13 01:05:00]
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Re: Black Heart
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by garyh on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:44:13 AM AEST
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| great story |
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Re: Black Heart
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by krystal on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:14:52 AM AEST
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crow I don't think you have written a poem I have not enjoyed. Once again this is absolutely wonderful. You have great talent crow please keep them coming. A great write and thoroughly enjoyed again !
Krystal:) |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:55:20 AM AEST
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well written as always
Shari |
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Re: Black Heart
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 01:22:38 PM AEST
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| you take me to places very few can....no second chance for the darkened souls.....amazing story....thank you for sharing...... |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:06:28 PM AEST
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Tragically that is the way of things but you have captured it so well
I'd very much value your opinion on the last one I have written ".......given up on Gods"
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Re: Black Heart
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST
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| thank you so much, Crow |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:51:39 PM AEST
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| thank you for the comment, Crow |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:55:20 PM AEST
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| thank you jaeann, i look foward to your comments, Crow |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:59:10 PM AEST
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| yes it does, sometimes good comes from it. Crow "on my way" |
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