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sHuTTiNg DoWn- - *
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Lost inside your world of hate,
wrapped in your despair,
searching for love, only too late,
your heart, dark and stripped bare.
Life from your soul, inside of me,
running through my veins,
trapped in your thoughts, my mind screaming,
burning from all the pain.
I grasp for you, Drowning i am,
inside your pool of tears,
if all we had was a mere sham,
then release me from these fears.
If every touch was a mistake,
then let this be our last,
if one thing I cherish soon must break,
then let it be our past.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2003-08-12 21:35:00]
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Re: sHuTTiNg DoWn- - *
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 10:10:02 PM AEST
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| this is a very good write, i really like the ending. Crow |
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Re: sHuTTiNg DoWn- - *
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:41:46 PM AEST
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Awww I love this....you said it so well...
Hugs
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