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He Treats Her Like A Prisoner
Contributed by
crossmyheartwithaknife
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Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
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He treats her like a prisoner.
This is how he shows,
his love for her.
He calls her names,
and constantly picks on her.
He bosses her around,
like she's some kind of slave.
There is always a frown,
upon her beautiful face.
Oh what a tragic case.
It's always what he wants,
and never what she wants.
He has very little trust in her.
He has many ways of making her cry.
She can never be caught,
talking to another guy.
Because if she tried to explain why,
he would just think it's another lie.
He makes her hide her beauty,
so the world can not see.
Because he knows she can find better,
better than he.
She is too blind to see this.
Too blind to see,
that she deserves better.
And that she should be let free,
from this horrible captivity.
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Re: He Treats Her Like A Prisoner
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by POOBEAR on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 06:50:57 PM AEST
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Hi,
I have seen relationships like this
too and your words come across
perfectly and with sensitivity. I
really think this is a great write!
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Re: He Treats Her Like A Prisoner
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:07:59 PM AEST
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| I would say that people have their own way on finding things cause if you point it out that it makes it harder on the person that he's doing that. I would still make her see that he's not good for her |
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Re: He Treats Her Like A Prisoner
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:14:06 PM AEST
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My friend had a boy friend just exactly like him. He was an over possessive and a psycho person and truly torturing her. Glad she left him.
Sad but a great write! Thanks!
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Re: He Treats Her Like A Prisoner
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:12:47 AM AEST
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| ive been exposed to them from childhood.....through friendships....and within my own life.....you cannot tell this person....they need to learn for themselves.....as long as your hand is there and they know...they'll reach for it when the time comes.....good good write..... |
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Re: He Treats Her Like A Prisoner
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by BABYGIRLAL28 on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:22:17 PM AEST
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| very heart breaking...but just be there when she does see. because a listening ear or a shoulder is what she will need ..don't judge just be there.. she think's it's her fault.. she don't deserve better because he has put this in her head...babygirlal |
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