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My time is yours

Contributed by cant-skate on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Emptiness my time is yours
And I lay on a bed
where
Roses feels like forbidden
And thorns filling my body
With pain
to describe the way I miss you

I wrote thousand of letters to your love
And drew millions of colors to your heart
And still red a color on my lips of pain and misery

I lay and I pray
To die maybe it will the end
Coz when u left I was a bride
From a life to a night
Where shadows are the flame
Of every star that shines…

By the time u were gone
My life is to be done
U took my heart
Took my soul
Once ur back I ll be gone




Copyright © cant-skate ... [ 2003-08-12 16:35:00]
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Re: My time is yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:49:19 PM AEST
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A very small & sweet poem! Good work!!


Re: My time is yours (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:33:15 PM AEST
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You get your pain across so well... I love the second stanza! Very uniquely worded. Just remember that everything happens for a reason, and if it's meant to be it'll work out, and if not, well... you'll get through it. I'm very sorry for this, it's really a difficult situation.

~ Moonlit


Re: My time is yours (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:09:18 AM AEST
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i wrote a thousand letters to your love.....and drew millions of colors to your heart.....wow!!!
i hope this person sees what they lost.....great write!!! especially the very first line.....


Re: My time is yours (User Rating: 1 )
by vince on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:39:19 PM AEST
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man its a nice poem coz i know ur feeling and i am in the same situation missin ur girl friend :) hicham .... :P


Re: My time is yours (User Rating: 1 )
by vince on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:40:55 PM AEST
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man its a nice poem coz i know ur feeling and i am in the same situation missin ur girl friend :) hicham .... :P


Re: My time is yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST
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Each line is powerful and indicates your pain. This is a wonderful and heartfelt write friend. Stay well!
Saira




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