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What I said
Contributed by
lilsk8ergurl9
on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My head is spinning, out of control,
Im losin my mind, no one will know.
I need to run. I have to hide,
But how can I escape when the feelings inside.
I need to not love, I shouldn't care,
I should have known you wouldn't always be there.
I need to get passed this, I have to forget,
But its so hard, because my mind was set.
I have to be strong,
But its difficult, knowing that your love was never real.
Questions run through my mind, answers I will never find.
How could you say you love me, when you really dont.
How could you make promises, then just leave me here alone.
My heart is broken, twisted and bent.
Empty and hollow,
I meant what I said.
I said what i meant.
I will love you,
Until im dead.
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lilsk8ergurl9
... [
2003-08-12 16:05:00]
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Re: What I said
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:55:37 PM AEST
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I know how this is exactly, I really liked the ending. Great Write.
*_-Psych-_* |
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Re: What I said
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by Sk8er909 on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 09:34:29 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem.I like the ending too |
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Re: What I said
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by lilsk8ergurl9 on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:22:09 PM AEST
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| thank you for the compliments. they are greatly appricated. im glad to know that im not the only one who can relate to this poem. |
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Re: What I said
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by lilsk8ergurl9 on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:23:21 PM AEST
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| thank you alot for the compliments. :) they are surely appricated. |
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