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Hope
Contributed by
hot-shot
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Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sometimes I feel all alone
I want to hide my face
And cry for my fate
Oh! The sorrows that lie within my heart
Sometime I feel that is my fate
That I am unfortunate
I still in hope that some day
My fate will change
And I will be a fortunate……………
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Re: Hope
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 06:18:47 PM AEST
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| it's very touching poem...well done Mr Zuhaib |
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Re: Hope
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:42:13 PM AEST
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I still in hope that some day
should probably read
I'm still in hope that some day |
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Re: Hope
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:10:36 AM AEST
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dear Zeb
i hope one day SAHAR will be
yours
(MUBASHIR) |
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