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A Walk
Contributed by
gogrl
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Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am haunted by the memories
of one or two good times,
I persevered while being chastised
for imaginary crimes.
Now the sun has set,
its light no more,
and the tide has washed away the shore.
I revel in the imagery,
your self appointed sanctity,
and wonder how it is I chose
this darkened path where the shadows close.
Take a walk with me
down this darkened path,
love has no place in eternal wrath.
I no longer fear this empty home,
So I am coming home alone.
Copyright ©
gogrl
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2003-08-12 14:05:00]
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Re: A Walk
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:18:44 PM AEST
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| Wow, inner turmoil. Tough stuff. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: A Walk
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 03:03:01 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a wonderful write, i can feel the sadness in your words, i look forward to seeing more from you.
Lisa |
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Re: A Walk
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by arthur1210 on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 09:16:28 PM AEST
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| Your opening caught me instantly, very nice. the emotion is great (in a sad way) well written... thanks for sharing |
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Re: A Walk
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by Saira on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:17:25 PM AEST
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Oh this is so beautiful...sad though...I loved it! Thanks!
Saira |
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Re: A Walk
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by gogrl on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:10:11 PM AEST
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Thank you very much! It was a tough moment for sure but life would be boring without those tough moments and I wouldn't be inspired to write if I didn't have them.
Have a beautiful day! |
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Re: A Walk
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by gogrl on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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Thank you Lisa. When I have more time I will be sure to read your posts as well.
Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Shannon |
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Re: A Walk
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by gogrl on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:13:29 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for takin the time to read my piece. Believe it or not I wasn't as sad as it sounds. It was more acceptance than sadness.
Thank you again and have a beautiful day. |
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Re: A Walk
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by gogrl on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:16:03 PM AEST
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Thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed it. It was probably one of the most meaningful pieces I have ever wrote. It came from the heart of acceptance not anger or misery ar anything else.
I am proud of that one and I am very glad that you enjoyed it.
Thank you again girl, have a great weekend!
Shannon |
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