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Don't Let Me Be Misunderstood
Contributed by
chrissylee
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Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Time goes on so slowly,
Each and every day,
I look for you, for support,
For you just to say.
Just to tell me that you care,
Even in some small way,
But lately, it's as if,
You are trying to push me away.
I come here to talk to you,
It's as if you don't give a damn,
I think I took everything the wrong way,
Maybe you don't understand.
Maybe the other day,
When you released to me,
All about you and life,
Possibly you think I am the one,
The reason you were found out,
This my friend I find very sad,
For I would never tell a soul,
When someone tells me in confidence,
Then in confidence it stays.
You have my trust in every way,
Betrayal that I would never do,
Life is a roller coaster,
The faster you go,
The harder it is to get off.
Just think about it,
If I were the one that betrayed you,
Would I really still be here,
Would I bother to stick around,
No I wouldn't, I would not be here,
This has been going through my mind,
For quite some time,
Don't think for one moment,
That I don't give a damn,
Cause I do and I can understand,
That right now for you,
Things are quite rough.
What ever happens I am here,
Even if just to lend a hand,
If there was any way,
I could help more,
I certainly would,
So please talk to me,
And I will talk to you.
I know if anything eventuates from us,
That the road will be long and hard,
This doesn't worry me,
In the slightest way,
I just don't want to be misunderstood
Copyright ©
chrissylee
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2003-08-12 11:05:00]
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Re: Don't Let Me Be Misunderstood
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:18:04 PM AEST
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Another sad one but really good work.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Don't Let Me Be Misunderstood
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by reflections on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 08:10:22 AM AEST
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A good story, and well written with good expression of thought. On the other side of the coin, the subject of the poems of yours that I have read, seems to be a person prone to pick losers who mistreat her, but not badly enough to convince her get off the one-way street she’s traveling. Even though she knows the traffic on that street are all going in an opposite direction from her. With her capacity to stick it out through any and all adversities, I can guarantee you that she can do much, much better on a different path. Still, it’s a well written story that’s always readable. Good luck.
(John)
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