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It's Taking Me With It

Contributed by Katie-Kate on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



When I look around
All I see is pain
I thought things were getting better
But you've gone down hill again.

All my friends are unhappy
They all seem to be insane
I try to ignore their beckoning
But resisting is such a strain.

I try not to let myself fall
to the level where they rest
I cling to all the good times
And shut out all the rest.

I am suffocating from the hurt
Resisting such a call
But although i may seem strong to you
I can feel myself start to fall.

Why can't i make it go away
Why can't I make it stop
I want to take their pain away
And make this bull S*** stop.

When I think about their sadness
And think about my own
I regret the love and strong support
I haven't always shown.

I should try to be there more for them
Try to share their pain
Try to give life back to them
So we all can live the same.

I am losing control of life
I am losing control of my mind
Relief only comes in daylight hours
When a destraction is easy to find.

My thoughts cannot be left alone
They wander off too far
But i can brink them back to sanity.
Well I've been able to so far.

When the night hours come
And I've nothing left to do
I start to lose my mind again
I don't know what I'll do.

I'm slowly going over the edge
Feeling the end is near
But I can't give up on all my friends
I want them to know I'm here.

I want them to be able to rely on me
I need a reason to live
The satisfaction is only reached
When there's something I can give.

But what if they don't need me
What if they get well
What will I do with my life then?
Only time will tell.





Copyright © Katie-Kate ... [ 2003-08-12 08:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: It's Taking Me With It (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 05:07:46 PM AEST
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Brilliant write, Warm feelings for u r friends.
Good work!!!


Re: It's Taking Me With It (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 02:50:47 AM AEST
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This is great. Wonderful. Kimmie_mac




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