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blades of skin
Contributed by
LIVINGLIFE
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Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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when the blades cut the skin the thoughts of sin flow out of my soul
its sad u see at what kind of hand life has given me
its not fair what happen to me when i was young but i live with it
he came in my dream and told me it was ok but it was all a lie
the carving aside the walls was deadly to my body knowing its over soon
he cut me once then i knew he was real not just a shadow figure outside the light
the laugh he gave was weird and he was burned bad
i guess i figured i had to do what had to do i sent back to hell in a bag
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Re: blades of skin
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:31:16 AM AEST
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you've captured your fear.....i've been there.....these words are profound..........he came in my dream.........scary.....
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Re: blades of skin
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 11:50:40 PM AEST
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Well, Hunnie (I'm his girlfriend) I think this poem is great. I knew about your fear but this is something amazing. You are living with this fear and you wrote about it! Keep up the work my sexy man!
P.S. I wouldn't mind a nice poem!!
Cilla |
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