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Dead Withing
Contributed by
ruby_star_angel
on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I don't know what to do anymore
I used to be so happy, but no more
I lost everything in a freak accident
I can't love another person, future or present
I lost my heart; it was torn to pieces and left on the ground
I lost my mind; reality broke into it and insanity is sticking around
I lost my hope; I let it go and it drifted away
I lost everything; so why am I still alive today?
I can't even recognize myself in the reflection
My face isn't what it was, my scars have infection
I can't find the old me, it's somewhere in my head
I can never bring back the old it, it's dead
I still live today because of one small belief
That I will find someone who will give me relief
But its all a lie; an illusion made inside
Trying to prove that I have already died
I'm lost, confused, depressed, insane
It's best for me to just end this pain
I grab the pills, and realize this is the end
I swallow the pills, and let them contend
I become dizzy, I smile with delight
This is it, my dying night
I whisper goodbye into the air
And collapse without a care
Goodbye everyone...
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ruby_star_angel
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2003-08-12 01:05:00]
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Re: Dead Withing
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:21:58 AM AEST
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this was well written and very emotional. Know what i can't take anymore of? People always saying there gonna kill themselves. I've been there before and it hurts to know that ppl are going through the same thing as me/ Just think of all the ppl that will miss you...
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Re: Dead Withing
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 07:10:06 PM AEST
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| oh this is so sad and beautiful...if you ever need to talk, please pm me, i promise i will listen... |
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Re: Dead Withing
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 06:49:32 AM AEST
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Oh Manda honey, please, please don't give up yet.. you know there are people that care about you, I care about you, and even though i'm not online much at the moment doesn't mean i don't think about you and hope for you and worry about you..
this is a beautiful poem, but let it stay a poem.. i'd miss you so much if you were to go.. give life a chance hun..
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