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truth, and the lady
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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bringing comfort to my now peaceful soul
those lines of laughter upon his sweet face
{why can't i breath when i think of you?}
i know to him i belong; in his arms my place
his beautiful eyes and sexy lips across the sea
{my heart into your open arms; a gift from me}
he effortlessly lights the shadows on my face
i now know; no other can ever take his place
the curve of his mouth it calls to my heart
does things to my soul i am unable to express
{what a funny thing to hear from a poetess}
one good loving man ever steady, true and strong
who has loved this simple rhyming woman all along
ever there to sing to my heart a happy song
always his love was there solidly behind my quiet eaves
freely floating feathers upon this soul; kindly sweet breeze
poetry pulled out of the woodwork of my mind
without whom; never had i ever of shared one word
{your right, 'tis time for our story to be heard}
i hear him call to me upon winds; love he sends
he whispers words that come to him into my soul
apart lost; no wonderous thing, together we are whole
so, our story briefly told here, it was always he,
this is the honest truth, and the lady, is me.
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
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2003-08-11 23:35:00]
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 11:58:10 PM AEST
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lovely
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:19:46 AM AEST
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true love beautiful
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:35:18 AM AEST
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How inspirational Ladyfawn. Shout it from the housetop...you have something that very few woman even enjoy!
Wonderful
Connie |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:48:12 AM AEST
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| this is truly beautiful......what a story......good for you..... |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:39:24 AM AEST
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| Such gorgeous feelings...how gently your heart sings..Lovely! (((huggers))) and a huge kiss too lol... x |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:52:14 AM AEST
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| you write wonderful and caring poems, i enjoy the read. Crow |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:29:17 AM AEST
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| Heartfelt true love.. wonderful.simply superb. venkat |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 03:22:03 AM AEST
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Hey you can't be telling everyone about me,just joking, one awsome write after another, I ONLY WISH I COULD AS WELL AS YOU, GREAT WRITE.
The Phantom |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 05:59:59 AM AEST
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Every one of your poems I've read is amazing, but I think this may be my favourite!! So many beautiful lines I can't even pick one to single out! It's just so gorgeous...
~ Dee |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by Bongo on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 10:31:39 AM AEST
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This lady i have known
Writes of love that has grown
Via computer and the phone
Now only by touch, will she be home. |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by POOBEAR on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:42:56 PM AEST
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Your poems are always so touching.
You write about love with such passion
and the joy it gives you. It is so inspiring.
I am very happy for you!
Love,
POOBEAR |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 09:17:10 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written ... I wish you all the happiness in the world Nessa ... love will find a way ... Jan |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:06:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful Nessa,
I would wish you all the happiness in the world, but i feel you already have it...
Truly brilliant write again, i am very happy for the both of you
- Becca |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 10:51:06 AM AEST
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WOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
I am sooooooo happy for you!!!!
Your words tell the story of a beautiful lady,
who finally saw her awesome guy,who was right there all the time!!!
May your love flourish as the blossom
that you are!!!!!!!
Angel always......godspeed..... joni
p.s. I'mmmmmmmm baaaaaaaack! ;-D |
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Re: truth, and the lady
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by Merry on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 01:57:47 PM AEST
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this is a really lovely poem - so full of love , tender feelings and very romantic
merry |
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