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Storms Of The Soul
Contributed by
DrogedaRain
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Storms of the soul raging so out of control
Is it fantasy or reality you feel or is it just another one of lives little quagmires and spiels
You tell me I need to know so I can continue to blossom and grow.
Will your heart ever really be free, from the one you loved before me?
Are there secrets you’re hiding or merely scared like me
Storms of the soul raging so out of control, let him know so he can tell me,
Is it fantasy or reality you feel or is it just another one of lives little quagmires and spiels
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Re: Storms Of The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:23:31 AM AEST (User
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well done
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Re: Storms Of The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:40:26 PM AEST (User
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I liked this starting line... "storms of the soul raging so out of control"...very nicely done write.
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Re: Storms Of The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 04:16:31 PM AEST (User
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The soul is definitely a storm. I love this title, and the poem is wonderful too. |
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