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The Unposession
Contributed by
Katie-Kate
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You've hurt me once too many
A score I'm yet to settle.
I am no longer fragile,
No longer like a petal.
I have will to push you back,
I have love to drive me on,
I have hate to keep me company,
to erase what you have done.
So give it your best shot,
But know that it's in vain.
Because you have lost the battle,
A loss that is my gain.
The scars you left ran deep,
But now they're just a scratch.
They remind me to be strong,
They helped me to detatch.
The scars that made it easier,
To hate you for what you are.
You knew you had it coming,
It was written in your stars.
So take it like a man,
Don't blame me for your loss.
You acted like you owned me,
But you were never my boss.
So think of what you've done to me
And the many more before
And prey we don't unite
And come knocking at your door.
Copyright ©
Katie-Kate
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2003-08-11 14:35:00]
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Re: The Unposession
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:12:29 PM AEST
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a powerful write, this is a great poem, i loved it, and also a great way to vent, don't let anyone treat you like that, least of all a man ;)
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Re: The Unposession
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by Ash on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:30:23 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is an amazing poem. Very empowering, and a way to rant without sounding like you're whining. You did something very constructive with the anger and frustration that you are within every right to be feeling. Beautfiulright, very powerful. I love it. |
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Re: The Unposession
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:27:42 AM AEST
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full of power and emotion
prey we dont untie and come knocking on your door, great!!
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