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This Heart of Mine
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I see the moonlight on the water
I feel my love, my arms around her
I know I love her deep inside
I know that a great love survives
I see the starlight shining bright
But brighter still, I see her eyes
I know not when this time will end
My heart, I know, won’t be alone again
I feel the warmth of her embrace
I look upon her lovely face
I know not when we both shall part
I only know she’s in my heart
And so I held my love once more
I held her tight, would not let go
I kissed her cheek, her cheek so fair
I ran my fingers through her hair
And then I woke from my slumber
From my dream, but still, I wonder…
If we apart are destined to be
Has love made a world for her and for me?
And so my heart, for her, bitter cries
And something, slowly, within me dies
But from such sorrow, new hope I find
Within these dreams, from this heart of mine
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wachumiri
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2003-08-11 08:35:00]
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Re: This Heart of Mine
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 07:54:08 AM AEST
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| aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, what she say when you gave her this poem....are you still together dont know when you wrote this....take care..very very good and i wish my hubby would write me a poem like this...hehehe sandy. |
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Re: This Heart of Mine
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 11:31:31 PM AEST
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| Yeah, you'll survive. OK, I like it. |
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Re: This Heart of Mine
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:12:08 PM AEST
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| lovely and beautifully written, a wish is a dream, a dream is but a wish hoping to come true:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: This Heart of Mine
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 06:18:17 AM AEST
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:P Nice comment from Andrew, there :P Helpful, isn't he?
I like the last stanza the most in this, all of it is pretty good, but this held it for me, it seems the most natural part of the whole poem. Some of your rhymes seem a little forced Still, nice write.
*hugs*
Me xxx |
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