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in a different love boat
Contributed by
maha_ak49
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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it's all a memory,
i can only recall,
your sweet smiles,
your witty talks,
god gave me all,
but,
he didn't give me the real life,
he gave me a simple world without,
the ever circling love,
i found it in you,
i thought we are in ,
the same boat,
later i found out that ,
it is just me,
in a different world.
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2003-08-11 07:05:00]
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Re: in a different love boat
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by sicknivesevered on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 09:22:44 AM AEST
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| Good poem. Right now I can't really grasp the entirety of the meaning, but its probably because I haven't slept in three days and "Destroyer of Senses" won't get out of my head. I like your poem though. I'll have to read it again later after I feed my subconsciousness. |
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Re: in a different love boat
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 05:53:09 PM AEST
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| Sweetie I think that is a beautiful poem and we are all in our own worlds to be honest with you. Just remember tomorrow is a new day full of beautiful light that will cast out the darkness of the days past... |
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Re: in a different love boat
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:25:13 AM AEST
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sweetie...........there's light under the door.........lay by the door.....make your wishes and dreams open it and you'll find the way out.....there's waiting arms.....knowing arms on the other side.......
love and peace |
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Re: in a different love boat
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by soul_je on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:56:51 AM AEST
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| Nice one. truly captures the pain and beauty of love. |
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